Comments on: The Professional Blogger’s Poem http://www.blogopreneur.com/2006/10/27/the-professional-bloggers-poem/ Tools, tips and learning resources to use your blog as an online business, marketing and communications platform. Thu, 02 Feb 2012 11:37:31 +0000 hourly 1 By: Kian Ann http://www.blogopreneur.com/2006/10/27/the-professional-bloggers-poem/comment-page-1/#comment-589279 Kian Ann Fri, 28 Nov 2008 02:14:24 +0000 http://www.blogopreneur.com/2006/10/27/the-professional-bloggers-poem/#comment-589279 Hey Rose! No worries, I love feedback! Yeah, I'm not a poem writer :P It was just for the fun of it. I just tried to make it rhyme. Heh, didn't know there was so much study behind the form and all the "A B A B" stuff. Hey Rose!

No worries, I love feedback! Yeah, I’m not a poem writer :P

It was just for the fun of it. I just tried to make it rhyme. Heh, didn’t know there was so much study behind the form and all the “A B A B” stuff.

]]> By: rose http://www.blogopreneur.com/2006/10/27/the-professional-bloggers-poem/comment-page-1/#comment-589263 rose Fri, 28 Nov 2008 02:03:21 +0000 http://www.blogopreneur.com/2006/10/27/the-professional-bloggers-poem/#comment-589263 :sad: first of all, sorry if im too critical, but id say try again.(sorry!!!!) your rhyming is GREAT so the only thing i need to say is you need to write in a different form. lik maybe a b a b form. heres an example, i wrote this on my cell: empty pangs of silence hand around me without tone but its only when im with so many i feel the most alone so i think that would be a good form. its my fav. or u can mix it u into a different form, lik A A BB A. thats also good too.so plzzzzzzz dont get mad at my criticism. its actually good for something riding on a bus. :sad: first of all, sorry if im too critical, but id say try again.(sorry!!!!) your rhyming is GREAT so the only thing i need to say is you need to write in a different form. lik maybe a b a b form. heres an example, i wrote this on my cell: empty pangs of silence
hand around me without tone
but its only when im with so many
i feel the most alone

so i think that would be a good form. its my fav. or u can mix it u into a different form, lik A A BB A. thats also good too.so plzzzzzzz dont get mad at my criticism. its actually good for something riding on a bus.

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